There once was a very tall and very wide mountain.
On one side lived a very busy and very lonely woman. She made her home in a cave at the foot of the mountain, and came out to get food and water from the river.
On the other side lived a very lonely and very active man. He made his home under a large fallen rock, and came out to get water and food from the forest.
At the top of the mountain lived a very old and very wise couple. They made their home in a small stone cottage build in an indentation, unseen from below. The couple knew of the existence of the man and the woman. They also knew that one day, the two would meet. They often discussed whether they should hasten this meeting somehow, but always disagreed on it. Sometimes the old man would suggest they get the man and woman together, and sometimes it was the old woman who suggested it. They never did anything, though sometimes one of them or the other would slip some extra food or drink into the cave or under the fallen rock.
One day, the woman was fishing, and she slipped and fell into the river, hitting her head on a rock. She floated unconscious down the river, all the way to the sea. She did wake up, with a nasty headache, but she didn’t know where she was. She made a life where she woke up – finding a new cave, and new places for food and drink. And she found people in a small village near the sea, and her life was made easier.
One day, the man was hunting, and he chased a deer up the foothills, up the crags to the top of the mountain. He found the stone cottage, and curious, he knocked on the door. The old couple greeted him, and welcomed him into their cottage. They served the man a fine meal, and built him a relaxing fire. During the night’s conversation, the woman came up, along with the fact that she seemed to be gone, and hadn’t been seen in quite some time. The man jumped to his feet immediately, and asked why they hadn’t ever told either of them about the other.
The old man told him that love cannot be forced, and friendships cannot be smashed together. They must happen naturally, in the course of doing what a person loves.
The old woman told him that in doing the things he loved, he was so focused that he forgot to find a person to love. Thus, the love that might have been, and the friendship that might have been, never existed.
The old couple told him that love and friendship do flow like a river, and are easy to follow, if one chooses to. The man asked the old couple how they had met, since there was no river on the top of the mountain. The old couple smiled at each other, and told the man that they had met while they were each searching for something greater than themselves. They both had reasoned that this thing greater than themselves must also be higher than themselves. And, long ago, in the indentation on the top of the mountain, they found each other, and knew they had found what they sought. They were true to themselves, and in doing so, were true for each other. The river is not the only thing that flows.
The man thought about this, and then thanked the couple. He climbed down the mountain and found the river. He followed the river, looking for food and drink, but also something deeper than himself. At the end of the river, where it met the sea, he found the depths. He explored the coral reefs, and the waves, and watched the sun set. He lay on the beach and watched the moon track across the sky, and fell asleep. And when he awoke, he turned one way and another, and saw, down the beach, a young woman.
The man stood up immediately, and the woman stood up immediately. The man walked into the water, and the woman walked into the water. The man swam towards the woman, and she towards him. As soon as they touched, they knew – she had come to the sea naturally, and found friendship naturally, and he done the things he loved without forgetting to find someone to share it with, and found love. And they swam out into the sea, and dove under the waves, hopelessly in love with one another. And they grew old with one another, and into one another, and lived under the waves.
There once was a very wide and very deep sea…
Edward Hotspur
Nice story.
Thanks for being the only 1 to read
Really? That was a good story…hmmm…everybody must be gearing up for the voting today. I’m ready. I’ll cast my vote at…1:30 my time…right? 12:00 your time? Good luck!
Actually 1pm my time. Yeah, we saw the judges scores.. harsh
You saw the scores? Did you see everybody’s scores?
*biting nails*
Yeah, with a twist. We saw the scores, but not who they were attached to. However many judges there are this week (I think 6), each of them read each of the blogs, and gave them a score from 13 to 1 (like in the college football poll) (because there are 13 contestants right now). Then they averaged the scores, and that’s your score.
Potentially more harsh is that they will post their comments along with each post when they go live. I say potentially, because it could be great. Great for me.
Vote for me!
Glad you liked this story, also.
Well, I know nada about college football polls, but your blog is fabulous (with the exception of a certain post about Furry fetishes) so I’m sure it will be fine!
I wonder if we can vote more than once?!? Hmmm….
That was a great post.
I’ll be blogging out a reminder or three over the next couple of days. Optimized, of course.
I read it! And I liked it, so there.
Oh snaap. You told ME. Vote for Pedrospur
Don’t forget voting is today
Your votes are important, because sometimes the contests come down to tenths of a point. This week, two people will be eliminated. Good luck, everyone who is competing!
You know I love it when you get all soft and mushy like a marshmallow. This was really really good, Ed.
Thank you. I can’t tell you how much effort it took for me not to take a left turn with this. I may still do it, for another post later, if I can’t think of anything to post about.
I have to admit I thought you would do something crazy in there somewhere. I am glad you left it alone.
I did leave it alone. Vote for Hotspur! LOL! I’m such a politician.
I need to vote for you. When is that? Where is that? What do I do? Help me to help you.
Visit my blog home page, and the first post has all the details. It also has a bunch of other stuff, including a funny video.
I did it. You are one vote richer. But the election for supreme poobah of the many universes is over, and I won because of low voter turnout, so don’t get to fired up. You can be my loyal second in command and have dominion over the minions. Minion dominion… say that 10 times fast.
I did, and now I need some beer.
When do you not need beer?
When I’m asleep.
I guess.
Unless I vomit.
That is always the crux of the matter, isn’t it?
No, I rarely do that.
I try to avoid it.
Embrace your dreams
race your dreams.
Mace your dreams.
Pace your screams.
A yr E
h u h ?
This is the day, this is the hour, this is this.
… the Earth stood still …of my discontent… all?
No, it’s a Pop Will Eat Itself album title.
Of course it is.
Thank you, Sir! I will appoint you Ambassador to the Universe. Then you can do whatever you want and still get paid.
Everyone else: Go here and vote for me!
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FREE FLOWING WAVES OF LOVE LOVE LOVE
THANK YOU! I need some of that right now.